tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7393884975603435627.post6458236357561261441..comments2010-10-26T08:29:23.834-07:00Comments on The Writer's Path: Money Can't Buy Love Back (1)Toyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01926260126150332568noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7393884975603435627.post-89499948283592509052010-10-20T23:00:19.152-07:002010-10-20T23:00:19.152-07:00Why thank you ^.^ That's very kind of you to s...Why thank you ^.^ That's very kind of you to say.<br />Lol, actually, yeah he is. At first I didn't plan it that way, but I had a friend read it for me, just to see what they thought. And she was like "Is he in love with her?"<br />I said "No..." But then I thought about it, and I thought. "Well...maybe he is." And when I thought about the story from that angle, it seemed much more...just more than if he wasn't. So I went with it, lol.<br /><br />And I suppose it was. I don't like switching POV in stories, but this was the only way I could make the story sound like I wanted it to sound. I might have a think up a better way, since you've got me thinking about it now, hehe.Toyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01926260126150332568noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7393884975603435627.post-52514434923569481122010-10-18T15:48:33.049-07:002010-10-18T15:48:33.049-07:00First, I must say how awesome your writing style i...First, I must say how awesome your writing style is. The physical details draw me in so easily! But I have a question: is Blaine in love with his sister? The way he imagines her makes me think so, and I know he's only her adopted brother. Is that what you were going for? Also, I noticed you switched point of view at the very end. Was that intentional?<br /><br />Overall, a great story idea. I can't wait to find out what happens next!Jaclyn Mariehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14880524332774271191noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7393884975603435627.post-29416093136028582372010-10-17T21:09:34.929-07:002010-10-17T21:09:34.929-07:00I thoroughly enjoyed it! Great use of descriptive ...I thoroughly enjoyed it! Great use of descriptive words. It was a pleasure to read ^-^. Looking forward to more.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14413232719421463682noreply@blogger.com